Attached are my comments, using the version Andrew sent on Friday.

 

-Scott

 

 

From: hubbardbrookcos-bounces@lists.sr.unh.edu [mailto:hubbardbrookcos-bounces@lists.sr.unh.edu] On Behalf Of Richardson, Andrew
Sent: Friday, February 05, 2016 4:36 PM
To: HubbardBrookCOS@lists.sr.unh.edu
Subject: Re: [HubbardBrookCOS] Draft of LTER proposal-- need comments by Feb 12

 

My edits are relatively minor, and relate mainly to CO2/H2O fluxes, phenology and uncertainty - I agree with Dick, it is looking great. (Though, some of the figures could be higher resolution! But at this stage, good to keep the file size down I guess)

Have a good weekend-

Andrew

 

On Feb 5, 2016, at 10:03 AM, Richard T. Holmes <Richard.T.Holmes@dartmouth.edu> wrote:

Hi Gary,

 

Here are a few comments on the proposal draft.  These are mostly on the heterotroph sections, and include some references and some updating of details.  I recently sent Matt Ayres some updated figures on long-term bird trends and distribution maps of selected bird species in the large HB valley.  I’m assuming he has or will send these to you.  If not, let me know.

 

Also, the bookthat Gene and I put together is now at the printers, and should be available by May.  So it is reasonable to list it as 2016. See my edits on the top of page 6.

 

Overall, the proposal looks great.  A lot of good research is goiing on.

 

Best,

 

Dick

 

 

 

From: <hubbardbrookcos-bounces@lists.sr.unh.edu> on behalf of Gary Lovett <lovettg@caryinstitute.org>
Date: Wednesday, February 3, 2016 at 6:37 PM
To: "HubbardBrookCOS@lists.sr.unh.edu" <HubbardBrookCOS@lists.sr.unh.edu>
Subject: [HubbardBrookCOS] FW: Draft of LTER proposal-- need comments by Feb 12

 

Dear Hubbard Brook  colleagues:

 

If you make comments on the LTER proposal, please start with the V.2  version that Tim edited  (attached).  Add your comments in Track Changes and add your name or initials to the file name.  When you return it to me, copy the COS list-serve.  You can add your comments to versions that others have marked up before you, in groups of 4 or 5 people per version. If there are already 4 or 5 people on a version, please start a new one, using V.2. as a base.  If we get 30 sets of comments on one version it will be too hard to read.

 

I need your comments by February 12.

 

Thanks!

 

Gary

 

Gary M. Lovett

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Cary Institute of Ecosystem Studies

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From: Timothy James Fahey [mailto:tjf5@cornell.edu] 
Sent: Monday, February 01, 2016 3:54 PM
To: Gary Lovett; HubbardBrookCOS@lists.sr.unh.edu
Subject: RE: [HubbardBrookCOS] Draft of LTER proposal-- need comments by Feb 12

 

Gary,

 

   I spent a day editing the version you sent around – see attached. Seems like it would be most efficient not to have everybody working at cross purposes on the same version. I’ve called this one v. 2. Should others build upon it? Also, I’m copying below the conceptual model behind the NxP fertilization study for possible inclusion. This is from work by Ruth, Melany and I.

 

Tim

 

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From: hubbardbrookcos-bounces@lists.sr.unh.edu [mailto:hubbardbrookcos-bounces@lists.sr.unh.edu] On Behalf Of Gary Lovett
Sent: Friday, January 29, 2016 8:46 PM
To: HubbardBrookCOS@lists.sr.unh.edu
Subject: [HubbardBrookCOS] Draft of LTER proposal-- need comments by Feb 12

 

Dear Hubbard Brook COS colleagues:

 

I have attached the latest draft of the LTER proposal for your review and comment.  I will need your comments back by Friday, February 12 in order to have time to consider and incorporate them. If you have time to read the whole thing, great!  If not, please review the sections that are most relevant to your work, and scan the marginal comments for any places you may be able to contribute.

 

The proposal is currently over the allowed length so any suggestions for shortening it will be appreciated.

 

Starting next week I will be contacting those of you who will be co-PIs on the proposal about budgets and paperwork that you will need to provide.   

 

Thanks!

 

Gary

 

 

Gary M. Lovett

Senior Scientist

Cary Institute of Ecosystem Studies

Box AB, 2801 Sharon Turnpike

Millbrook, NY 12545 USA

 

Phone   845-677-7600 x132

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